I’m posting some of the reviews I’ve received so far from the good people at Authonomy. All in all, this is a pretty good showing for the book, given that it’s only been up there for a couple of days.
You have crafted a most intriguing and complex storyline. I like your choice to use the first person narrative voice. This allows you to convey, and you do it well, Peter’s feelings, observations and thoughts. Your character development of Martin and Peter is well done and your descriptive writing makes your work a pleasure to read. Backed.
– Andrew Burans, The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning
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You sure write well.
Very impressed
Yasmin Esack, THE DATE
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Fantastic (hopefully!) idea for a book. I loved the way you dived straight in with the dialogue! Backed.
– Gordon, The Harpist of Madrid.
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Dear Michael
What a thoroughly interesting premise for a book, and quite the original read. Your characters are strong, so much so that this was not the book to open when I wanted to go to bed, cant put it down. i I will carry on reading and comment further on as I would like to get this book of yours backed to assist it on the climb to the top.
Backed for sure by me…The VERY best of luck with your book
Denise
The Letter
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Intriguing, entertaining start.
I enjoyed the opening scene very much, and the pace keeps up; well written, witty, and following a strong storyline.
– AlleJo
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This is a story based on an interesting premise: what would happen if a guy decided that killing a President could lead to revolution? It’s doubly interesting because the person who will be responsible for stopping Martin’s plan is his brother – and brother/brother battles are always interesting. You have good contrast between the two brothers. Makes this a good read. I’m adding it to my shelf.
– Burgio, Grain of Salt
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Exciting book, always running at a fast pace.
Well thought out and descriptive. You have a good writing talent that shines through.
I like it . Backed. and SHELVED.
– Neville, The Secrets Of The Forest
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Dear Michael,
This is an excellent piece which I am more than happy to back. Thrillers are always my favorite genre and by the tone of your synopsis I know this one’s going to keep me on the edge of my chair. Backed with pleasure
– Helen, The Last Dream
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Darn good beginning, Michael.
I confess, I just skimmed cause I’m not in the mood for reading right now. I’ll check out some more of it later. Still, I see competent writing and good structure right off the bat, so I’m sure you’re going to carry this off well. I’ll go ahead with the backing now. Best of luck with it.
– Groaner
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Very clever title, this always inspires confidence and the brother’s spat drew me right in. Well done.
– Paula Barrett, Cuthbert-how mean is my valley
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Excellent! Easy to back for talented and creative writing!
– Liz, The Cheech Room
